Betrayed - an ache in my heart
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Everything I wanted
Everything I longed for
You seemed to have
But now as I watch you
You’re not the same
The ache in my heart tells me
I’ve been betrayed
Your eyes that once glittered
Blue with such grace
The love that was in them
Has seemed to fade
The ache in my heart tells me
I’ve been betrayed
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The love that had conquered
Sweet words that were said
Now all is gloomy
And sky looks so gray
The ache in my heart tells me
I’ve been betrayed
Where did you go
Where is that place
That leaves me crying
In hurt and disgrace
Where is the laughter
Where is the flame
That we had lit
All night and all day
The ache in my heart tells me
I’ve been betrayed
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I behold strength
Tears came and they went
Now I know truth
In a heart that still aches
When I turn weak
From a smile you’ve displayed
I will remember I’ve
Been betrayed
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Thank you RecoverToday! I really appreciate it:)
Beautiful work of art. thank you for sharing it. Blessings to you. creativeone59
And thank you Creativeone, for reading it and commenting:-)
Beautiful.
Wonderful poem...I can really relate to every word as I have experience this in my life. Absolutely fantastic and expressive beyond words...
Wow. Absolutely wonderful. You have such a gift with words....Madison! Great job!
Fishtiger, thank you. Very sweet of you!
Trose, I really appreciate your kind comment:)
Beautiful Madison! Very powerful. It makes me scared a bit to fall in love sometimes cause you just never know.
Thank you Janny!
You did a beautiful job describing your feelings. I wonder if he knows? I totally understand what you mean about feeling "betrayed" and that it has nothing to do with infidelity. I, too feel that way. Beautiful poem, sad for me, but good enough to stir up my emotions. That's a good thing.
This is so awesome! Almost like a knife.....the feelings. Wow.
Exactly WS, No infidelity its the promises that were made and everything else...Well you know. Thanks!
donotfear, thanks so much:)
beuaitful and we remember that feeling, Maita
Thank you PDH!!
powerful poem and it touches the soul
Thank you Alexandria, I felt it in my soul as I wrote:)
I will add again, of all your poems, i like this best, it strung a chord in me, hehe, soulful if I may say!
One of my best as well. So glad you like it:)
Hi Madison22,
Feelings are so deep in this poem that it made me sad. This quote explains all......
“Love never dies a natural death. It dies because we don't know how to replenish it's source. It dies of blindness and errors and betrayals. It dies of illness and wounds; it dies of weariness, of witherings, of tarnishings.” Anais Nin
Mr Nice, thank you. Great quote!
Madison22, you are very welcome, I really liked the poem. Take care & good night.
Mr. Nice, Glad you liked the poem. Good night to you too. :)
Nice poetry. You have expressed your true feeling through your written work and that's great for a writer. Keep up.
Masmasika, thank you for such a kind comment. Give's me inspiration.:)
Very lovely words, and beautiful write ^_^
Seraphim, thank you:) Have a lovely day.
When you love someone and have been betrayed it is hard to gain trust again. It is hard to get over even if you want to, I too have been betrayed. Mine was my own flesh and blood, my sister. You can feel your heart as you read your poem. Very well done
RecoverToday 2 years ago
Excellent expression of emotion here. May you have peace and dignity in your life.